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You’ve Tried It All. Here’s Why Nothing Has Worked—Until Now.
Tired of Cookie-Cutter Fitness Plans? Let’s Build One That Works for YOU.
Your Body, Your Goals—A Fitness Plan That Finally Fits YOUR Life.
Diets & Workouts Keep Failing You? This Changes Everything.
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Hey [First Name],
PROBLEM: You’ve Tried Everything—But the Results Never Stick.
You’ve followed the diets.
You’ve pushed through the workouts.
You’ve done everything the fitness industry tells you to do.
But despite all the effort…
The weight keeps coming back.
The workouts feel exhausting, not empowering.
You’re stuck in a cycle of starting, stopping, and second-guessing yourself.
And the worst part? You’re beginning to wonder if lasting change is even possible for you.
AGITATE: You’ve Been Given the Wrong Approach.
The problem isn’t your willpower.
It’s not your metabolism.
It’s not that you “just need to try harder.”
The real problem? You’ve been following plans that weren’t built for YOU.
The truth is:
One-size-fits-all fitness plans don’t work—because you’re not like everyone else.
Extreme diets set you up to fail—because they don’t fit your lifestyle.
Training harder doesn’t guarantee better results—training smarter does.
That’s why nothing has stuck—until now.
SOLUTION: Your Fitness Should Work for You—Not the Other Way Around.
At Coach Ollie Fitness, we do things differently.
Workouts Built for YOUR Body & Schedule – No templates, no random routines. Every session is designed to fit your goals, experience level, and available time.
Nutrition That Works in Real Life – No starvation, no complicated meal prep. Just simple, sustainable guidance that fits into YOUR daily routine.
24/7 Coaching & Accountability – Because fitness isn’t just about what you do in the gym—it’s about having the right support system that keeps you on track.
Real Progress, Not Quick Fixes – We’re here for long-term results, not temporary wins.
And the best part?
This isn’t a fad, a crash diet, or a temporary fix. This is a system built around YOU—so you can finally see results that last.
This Is Your Moment—Don’t Let It Pass You By.
I only take on a limited number of clients to make sure every person gets the personalized coaching they deserve.
Spots are filling fast—apply now to lock in your place.
[Click here to apply before it’s too late → [Insert Link]]
No more second-guessing. No more starting over.
This time, it’s different.
This time, it’s built for YOU.
Coach Ollie
Coach Ollie Fitness
Why This Version is Flawless & Will Convert More Clients
Stronger Emotional Pull – It makes them feel their struggle before offering a solution.
Creates Tension & Urgency – The copy builds frustration, then provides relief with the program.
Feels Like a 1-on-1 Conversation – It reads like a personal message from a coach, not a generic promo.
Powerful CTA – It positions signing up as an exclusive opportunity, not a request.
No Fluff, Just Impact – Every sentence earns its place and moves them closer to action.
Final Answer: THIS is the email that gets sign-ups. It’s clear, persuasive, and impossible to ignore.